Vidal Gore — Eighteen Seventy [1988]

Gradually one heard, louder and louder, the sibilant in Bristow’s name until the fervent applause of those nearest him was taken up by concentric ring after concentric ring of humanity until, at its crescendo, he turned to the people—his people-to-be?—removed his hat, bowed, and took his place with the rest of the Cabinet. Emma was amused. “The other Cabinet ministers don’t seem at all pleased. Look at Mr. Fish. He seems to be asleep. — Vidal Gore, Eighteen Seventy, 1988

Note

This passage uses internal dialogue to capture a character’s self-awareness and highlights the contrast between public perception and internal reality, deepening the reader’s understanding of the political climate.