Passive voice and jargon are teachable techniques for hiding agency
Evidence
Professor Gerald Grow (2012) has written brief guidelines called âHow to Write âOfficial,ââ which provides a set of rules on how to communicate opaque-ly and misinformatively. These rules, which specify the nine top features of good euphemistic writing, include: Put it in the passive voice and delete the agent of the actions; inflate with terminology that does not add meaning; build in noun strings; add a qualifier of uncertain relation to the original statement; add noun strings and terminology to the qualifier; separate related words; equivocate and obfuscate; cover your tracks and make yourself look good. â Albert Bandura, Moral Disengagement, 373
Categorization
- SEED: Growâs nine rules could anchor a practical piece: âdeleting the agentâ via passive voice is the single grammatical move that strips moral responsibility from sentences.
- DEFINE: Crisply enumerates the formal linguistic maneuvers, topmost being passive voice that conceals who acts.
- XREF: Passive-voice agent deletion connects to Zamyatinâs We and bureaucratic registers that erase individual responsibility. â connects to: Deploying technical jargon in public meetings functions as a silencing tactic against residents; Technical jargon functions as a silencing weapon against unschooled residents â Luke W. Cole and Sheila R. Foster, From the Ground Up: EnvironmentalâŠ, 235; Institutional bureaucratic writing follows teachable rules for opacity and misinformation
- corroborated: 2 independent passages support this claim â Albert Bandura, Moral Disengagement: How People Do HarmâŠ, 373